There's something powerfully masculine about this. Bits of word-ordering, description -- 'her wish was delayed until the wheels of war delivered him to her.' As though Rasler was her rightful prize to be claimed, all it required was a bit of fate to get things happening. Even 'wilted desire' -- wilting of desire seeming particularly masculine/male-associated.
(Or, then again, masculine or ego-centric? I fall into the bad habit of thinking about them as the same thing.)
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Date: 2011-04-30 09:00 am (UTC)(Or, then again, masculine or ego-centric? I fall into the bad habit of thinking about them as the same thing.)